Final Destination 5 by me?

Question by Brandon: Final Destination 5 by me?
1st Tragedy: A school dance is being held at the school library and almost all 8th graders are participating in this particular event. The theme is typically Heaven and Hell(The teens that cheated death were with the Hell side). Suddenly, an unsuspecting earthquake strikes and the 2 sides of the library collapses and blocks the only 2 exits in the library. Then, the shaking continues and topples a large bucket of water onto the stereo system causing a major electric shock to a few students and then exploding killing about 8 students. The explosion causes the roof of the library to crack and break. Debris starts falling on the students and the bookshelves topple everywhere. The protagonist gets stuck under a large piece of debris after the whole disaster. Then, a still hanging debris falls on him and then he wakes up from his vision, still standing in line to enter the dance. He warns the students that there is going to be a major earthquake and everyone is gonna die in the library. A few of the students started arguing with him and then a fight began. The principal comes out and breaks up the fight and then telling the 13 students that they cannot enter the dance. They all get frustrated and angered at that student. Then, 10 minutes later, the students feel a rumbling shake beneath their feet and they can see the library caving in. Then, a piece of debris topples onto 2 of the students. The rest screamed and ran away to get some nearby help.

Death List(random order)
1. A girl slides down a homemade water slide in her backyard, not knowing that a tube piece is tilting and that the bolts have been taken out by Death. She slides down right into the broken piece, slicing her body vertically.
2. While doing his homework, the hot sun is shooting right at him and he starts to get hot, so he turns on the ceiling fan to max and continues doing his homework. The speed and pressure of the fan is so strong that the fan starts to break from the ceiling, typically falling down and decapitating his head.
3. A boy decides to take a shower since the weather is so hot, but first, he needs to take a dump before showering(Be warned, this might be a little too gross). He turns on his fan before doing so. He had eaten a bean and cheese burrito before pooping and he has diarrhea. Once he flushes, the waste gets clogged and the water starts to elevate and pour out. He panics and he tries to open the door but the door knob breaks off and he is stuck in his own bathroom. He tries to plunge out all the waste but failed to do so, so he runs towards the door, slips on the water and knocks down the fan. The fan breaks and electrocutes him to death.
4. While making rice for her family, a girl washes the dishes before her parents arrive home. As she washes the dishes, she places the wet dishes into the dish rack and accidentally spills water onto the plug to the rice cooker. It starts to make static noises and still she doesn't know it. After she was done with the dishes, she walks away, but then hears a loud crackling pop. She goes to the source and it explodes the rice cooker near her. A piece of hot metal shoots at her mouth and burns inside her mouth. She quickly takes it out and tries to cool down her mouth, but the debris flew to the gas stove and it quickly ignites and explodes. The fire burns her and it explodes her home.
5. A boy is exhausted from the heat and decides to go cool off in his canvas tent out back. Although there is hot winds blowing by, he doesn't mind because his canvas is cool. But the rusted supports of his tent start to creak. The boy doesn't mind it though and thinks nothing will go wrong. But then a strong wind blows and the support breaks off, swinging down at his head, impaling him on the back of his head.
6. While on the busy streets, girl's mom is taking her daughter to a friends house with her friend. As they park on the sidewalk lane, cars are rushing by on the girls side of the car. Her friend insists that she goes out her way, but the traffic clears up and then she says that she will exit her way. She opens the door stands up and a bus comes rushing at her and crashes into her and the door.
7. A bunch of bullies decide to flatten a boy's bike tires, just before he would leave for home. 5 minutes later, the boy comes out and rides it out onto the bike lane. As he is driving, he runs over a sharp nail and it makes his front and back tire even worse. He swerves and swerves and then his bike tilts and he falls into a car lane. An upcoming truck comes up and the tires smashes the boy head and feet into a pancake.
8. While at a pool party, the friends are in the jacuzzi and a girl decides to head out for the big pool. The other friends stayed behind in the jacuzzi. As she nears the big pool, there is no one in there so she says to herself that this is even much better. She heads to a chair near a control booth and presses a button to open the pool covers. The covers slide out and she jumps in to
This is totally fake! These are my ideals of a 5th movie, but this time revolving around middle schoolers, not high schoolers/adults.
1st Tragedy: A school dance is being held at the school library and almost all 8th graders are participating in this particular event. The theme is typically Heaven and Hell(The teens that cheated death were with the Hell side). Suddenly, an unsuspecting earthquake strikes and the 2 sides of the library collapses and blocks the only 2 exits in the library. Then, the shaking continues and topples a large bucket of water onto the stereo system causing a major electric shock to a few students and then exploding killing about 8 students. The explosion causes the roof of the library to crack and break. Debris starts falling on the students and the bookshelves topple everywhere. The protagonist gets stuck under a large piece of debris after the whole disaster. Then, a still hanging debris falls on him and then he wakes up from his vision, still standing in line to enter the dance. He warns the students that there is going to be a major earthquake and everyone is gonna die in the library. A f
There is suppose to be 11 deaths total but my writing exceeded the limit. I will give you brief notes on how 8,9,10 and 11 die: 8: Metal pool covers slice her body in half. 9: Car explodes with the boy in it at a gas station. 10: An explosion in a major traffic accident causes a vehicle to fly directly at her. 11: Dies when large glass shards from car windows are shot at his eye during the traffic explosion. :] Hehe. Can you imagine how painful these deaths could be?
Final Destination V description: A 13 year old boy, Hendrick Michaels sees a horrific vision of a major earthquake destroying the school library where the 8th grade dance is being held. He wakes up from his horrific vision only to find out that his dream had become real. 2 months after the tragic incident, the survivors mysteriously start to die and it becomes clear to Hendrick that Death will not stop until fate has been fulfilled. "Too young to die doesn't stop Death from killing middle schoolers."


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Answer by Nathan
(Sees text wall)
runs away


arrrrrrgggghhhh!

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